I loved it! This is the first burlesque story I've ever read and you did an excellent job pulling me into it. It was like seeing a behind-the-scenes performance of an adult-circus.I could see everything through Frankie and Johnny's eyes clearly. Chapter Two's ending leaves me begging for more...I want to know what thoughts are going on in Johnny's head after THAT! LOL Great job, Laura.
I loved it! This is the first burlesque story I've ever read and you did an excellent job pulling me into it. It was like seeing a behind-the-scenes performance of an adult-circus.I could see everything through Frankie and Johnny's eyes clearly. Chapter Two's ending leaves me begging for more...I want to know what thoughts are going on in Johnny's head after THAT! LOL Great job, Laura.
ReplyDeleteYES! *fist pump* Thanks for the feedback, Tiffany! That's exactly what I was going for! XO
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