Monday, January 28, 2013

77-7-7 Manuscript Peep Show!

I was delighted when Twitter comrade and fellow writer Nat Russo tagged me into Melanie Sokol's Manuscript Peep Show. 

To recap the rules:

1. Go to the 77th page of your work-in-progress
2. Count down 7 lines
3. Share the 7 lines that follow

Here's the 77-7-7 from my soon-to-be-published romantic suspense, All That Glitters:

Underneath everything he’d accomplished, underneath all his finely-honed self-control, was someone violent.  Someone selfish.  Someone just like his father.  Someone he never wanted Ava to see.
His gaze drifted to her face.  Her eyes were closed, her breathing even. 
She’d fallen asleep. 


  1. Replies
    1. Haha! I promise he doesn't sound like such a creep when you read the whole book!


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